All Comments on 'William the Hypnotist Ch. 04 - Conclusion'

Wow... The original concept had merit. But the story ended up being rather blaze'. It ended up being rather boring, But the end. There isnt aanything sexy about a woman being abused like that. Adfitionally, if his plan was to just sell her, why not sell all three of them? I wish you well on your future writing endevors, but this one was time I wish I could get back.

i would like it better if the story was shorter, and William had got his balls and cock shot off.

This story is horrendous. Why would you want to write a story where women are abused. This is not in any way interesting, and I will not read your material again.

Describing this story as horrendous is absolutely appropriate. Uninspiring, cold, and unemotional.

The conclusion is piss poor.

Sobering conclusion I liked it a lot!