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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
No its not

Because there will be no next time. In your wildest fantasy you think people want to be treated like that? I think not. If you think that treatment of another human being is ok, check yourself into the mental ward.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice story

but another story fragment.

The story starts out with the man writing to the reader, but in the 4th paragraph switches and is talking to his Mistress. With the hairbrush, he’s again addressing the reader. Awkward. J.

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