All Comments on 'Wimp Goes After the Beauty'

Nice one, got chuckles. I like the light touch skewering some Literotica cliches.

R.

This was fun and very humorous. I enjoyed the story and the over-the-top humor except for how he doesn’t mind betraying his friend’s trust with regard to the special date. That was a bit of a turnoff but funny that the risk seems to be worth the probable cost.

In the 3rd or 4th paragraph, I think you’re missing a word: “these [days?] we often...”