All Comments on 'Windows Ch. 02'

Game over bitch.

Jill is gone.

Why was the mom so quick to believe Colin over her son?

Are they already fucking?

Great story!

Where others commented disappear to?

I've liked many of your stories, but in this one the mother and gf are so annoying and unpleasant that it doesn't feel like the bully is stealing something precious from the main character. It feels more like he's doing him a favor, which obviously undermines the impact a netorare story for me.

I had to get rid of the other comments, because the guy was harassing me on my Yahoo account and his feedback was reconstructive. Very hurtful.

Working on Ch.03. Jill's mom will be the first woman out of the three to have sex with Collin. Jill watches

@Author Asperger27

Btw, no offense but Jack's mom and Jill are utterly ridiculous especially Jack's mom who seems to COMPLETELY forget how Collin bullying her son so far and believe his words like gospel and being hostile against her son all the times to the point of being one dimensional and super annoying, Can you add a twist where Jack finally snap and do his worst to live up to his Mom's 'expectation' and make everyone living hell...at least that would make plot look more new and fresh.

hmmm... Jill gives him a blowjob, her mom will have sex with him in the next chapter... I guess that means that Jack's mom will get sodomized in chapter 4

Dear Asperberegr u need to seriously have urself checked out!! Pse don’t be around your kids till ur u healthy obsession with incest is cleared!!!or atleast get a divorcee nA drive custody of ur kids to ur wife! I worry for them with u as a dad!