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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Licking up my clothes.my Vick getting hard.please use spell check in the future.Learn tell English language before posting please.it will make reading this a lot easier.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

I think you should take your own advice Anonymous and you spell check yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Nope

No build up at all. Not my kinda story

Whirling DervishWhirling Dervishover 4 years ago
I couldn't finish this

Too many errors. You had what could have been a good story but there were too many grammatical errors, misspellings, fragments and overall poor writing. If you continue to write, please find an editor before you post. Literotica has volunteers that can do that for you. More of a build-up would have been better too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Consider

retaking 2nd grade

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