All Comments on 'Winter Camp Closure Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I always enjoy mother-son sex stories and this one was an interesting take on the age-old trope. Good to see the guilt-trip minimized and the transition to semi-consensual sex smoothly accomplished with an acceptable rationale.

Cries out for at least one sequel. Looking forward to it. Kudos.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Straight up rape story and shouldn't even be here. On top of that, what you were attempting to do, was just badly written. Like an angry trench-coat goth kid wrote it after his mom lowered his data plan or some shit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Don't bother with a Chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well done. Bravo. Absolute 5.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Poorly written

davevsr1davevsr1almost 2 years ago

Not a big fan of rape stories but well done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Slow start. Need to see her go from victim to lustful mother.

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Worked in Africa which are the background for some stories, nearly every sex scene is true or based very closely to actual events.

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