All Comments on 'Winter Getaway'

The only reason I didn't give ya five instead of the 4 is the abrupt ending. I hope you decide there is more to the adventure.

This should be the start of a fantastic weekend and more for the players.:)

Part2 is definitely needed and wanted.

Very nice, a good start, but could have been longer or filled out a bit better. Nothing bad about it in my mind, just not complete.

Very hot and nicely written. Can’t wait for what happens next…

“A landing strip??” What is going to land there? Mosquitoes? Flies?

I've resolved to leave more feedback, so here goes.

3 stars. Nothing bad about it, per se, but it's not very fleshed out. Could have been a longer, better story even with the same ending point. Not every story needs to be a ten page epic, but this could have been a three pager very easily and not dragged.

More than that, it wasn't much of an incest story. Anna touched Julia's inner thigh. That's it. I'm sure you'll expand on it (if you plan on continuing it), but it just didn't work for me as a standalone in this category.

That being said, good on you for writing it. I have a few ideas kicking around in my head and haven't put word one on the page, so I have to respect the time and effort you put into it.

Great story, but just as it started getting good it was over! Hope there’s another chapter in the works

Fantastic story. Love the build up and your choice of words.