All Comments on 'Winter Maid Ch. 01'

Well written, and (it appears) you're leaning into a theme I've been exploring in my own stories. I look forward to reading more. Thanks for submitting!

I look forward to see how Crystal...I mean Mia....develops.

If you already have your dream girl., You both are having amazing sex. So why would you even dream of mind controlling her? Even if the only downside is you have to the dishes more often?

Great start. Looking forward to see this story continued :)

Thank you for writing it.

I love the story and wait for the next part

Thanks

Love the start of the story and looking forward to more!

The fact that you feel confident enough to pace this slow-and-steady shows confidence. You’re doing it right! I like the characters, the setting and the hot gadget.

Excellent story! The writing and plot are equally good and I cannot wait to see what future adventures are in store. Will Mia dress as a snow hare or a wolf and have to play in the snow?

Loved the direction you're taking it