All Comments on 'Winter Maid Ch. 04'

You have made every chapter so incredibly hot but it wasn’t just the usual stuff that many stories have. You were imaginative and inventive while covering a really wide variety of kinks. I applaud your efforts, skill as a writer and attention to details.

Excellent five star story and chapter again. I look forward to more. Thanx.

Although it wasn’t the mid-numbing girl like your last chapters (which I would still love to see in a loving and equal relationship), seeing Brian take control of Mia a little against her will was amazing. I’d love to see Brian take more control and maybe make her a little mindless, but more importantly have Brian make Mia guess her programming rather then tell her before hand. Maybe even have the trigger wear off if Mia figures it out. Great story though can’t wait to see what happens next.

Excellent shift in mood. I really enjoyed the extreme, but the eager, willing submission is the hottest part. I think there's still room for further, temporary moments of insanity - she definitely seems like she'd miss never feeling that again. But the cute moments are great, too, and a healthy relationship in a MC story is fantastic. *****

Well as long as she becomes the 'winter maid'.....

I do feel a little gyped though

This is my favourite story of yours, real close to felformia. Was just wondering if I can expect it to continue? Happy holidays

This story will continue for a while longer. I'm publishing Chapter 5 this week on my own page, and it will be published on Literotica about a month later. So expect Chapter 5 in early February. Thanks.