All Comments on 'Winter with the Wolf Ch. 03'

This is a really good story please finish it.

Really good plot, anxious to read more.

I'm so glad to see another chapter. I thought for sure you had given up, but am happy to be wrong about that. Please do keep it up. You'll be surprised how the plot may just flow out of you on it's own if you just let it happen. Not everything has to be planned in advance. Good luck. I'm already a fan. ~K.

I think you have enough back story to make your plot work. From what I can tell there is something between Eric and Keenan, and it seems Donovan's loyalties could be tested since we know Eric is lying. And of course you still have the dynamic between Keenan and Mia. I believe you have enough to work with without making it overwhelming since this is your first story. You are doing a good job. Maybe making the chapters longer would help. Looking forward to the next chapter.

You story is well with the time.

I'm enjoying the story, but if the warning you're considering is killing her dog then I have to tell you I won't be able to keep reading the story. I know it sounds ridiculous, but I have a visceral reaction to any kind of cruelty to animals, and this lunatic seems like the the type that wouldn't have an issue hurting a dog.

donovan looks to be headed for a choice considering what he knows about the situation. could he, perhaps, come across his OWN mate? maybe a friend of Mia's? and maybe he is destined to be the next alpha in his pack because Eric is dangerous and not alpha material? looking forward to seeing where you go with this story. it's terrific and deserves to be finished. hope to see more soon. thanks for writing.

a sex scene!!!!!!!!!!

I really enjoyed this chapter, thank god they are moving slow and not jumping into the bed

Proof that you can't please everyone. So I don't even try.

are so cute together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But, seriously!