All Comments on 'Wish Box Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Glad to see another installment

I really enjoy this story, and have anxiously been awaiting a new installment.

As I read, I became a little worried as it had so much .. . .'hot stuff' going on, I feared there wouldn't be any "story" part. And as I said, I really enjoy this story as well.

I am a little confused as to why he 'blew the deal'. Didn't he just save the guys life? Sounds like he should be rewarded with a top notch sale or something at least.

Oh well, you got me sufficiently hooked & curious.

I can't wait for the next part.

devildog0302devildog0302over 5 years ago
Please...

Don’t make us wait so long for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Possibilities

An idea that seems often overlooked in this rype of story is to change your own character through this medium. Ie. Wish to be 6'4" tall with a muscular build and a 10" cock and an I.q. of 160 or whatever criteria meet with your story arc. Just an idea that seems forgotten sometimes as we focus on changing others. Of course as the author you may have intentionally written it from the perspective you did. Lol thats why its the comment section, us armchair quarterbacks can say what we want while you laugh and go the opposite direction. Thanks for sharing your story, I'm enjoying it immensely.

MarkT63MarkT63over 2 years ago

Interesting intrigue...

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