by Razmagurk
Love it. Yes, you have me hooked and I'm waiting on your next installment! Well done, "laying" the groundwork for a next chapter...
I love this so much!!!! Please continue! If you ever want someone to bounce Ideas off please let me know :P
I love this story it’s absolutely hilarious this series should be continued you have a great storyline started here!!!
Love your writing style, prose, and the exciting imagery. My only problem was how colossally stupid the main character has to be to, at no point, put 2 and 2 together and figure out what was going on. Maybe they figure it out in the next chapter (have only read Pt. 01), but his/her blind anxiety killed any boner I might have had, instead of laughing or enjoying I was just groaning in frustration (though, given the comedic tone with the Djinn, that may have been intentional, in which case bravo).
Just enjoy it dude! Or resolve to get your dick back when the Djinn comes back to check on you.