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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Fun idea, but execution needs polish. Missing words and wrong words made it difficult to read. An editor or something like Grammarly would help. The word you needed was ‘vial’; vile means something very unpleasant, horrible.

dr_depthdr_depthalmost 3 years agoAuthor

"Fun idea, but execution needs polish. Missing words and wrong words made it difficult to read. An editor or something like Grammarly would help. The word you needed was ‘vial’; vile means something very unpleasant, horrible."

Thanks so much for the feedback! Will definitely work on that.

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