by dr_depth
I have been confused most of the time during this story but you do a good job of clearing up that confusion as you move things along. I am getting into this even more now and have liked it the entire time. Please continue and thanks.
Thanks for the comment! If you don't mind elaborating, what things were you confused by? I'd like to know so maybe I can be more clear and concise the first time these elements show up instead of it being cleared up later.