All Comments on 'Witches in Bikinis'

Good first try and even set it up for spin-iff novels about tge witches

A cute little 'Ween story.

"And in Japan, hymens are replaceable for a small cost at the local hospital." Popped into mind at the end of the story.

"Toil, toil and trouble

Pop, pop the bubble." - As the chorus.

So many different ways to take the story. Looking forward to further writings.

I really love your sense of humor. It’s fantastic.

I would love to see more editing though. This story could have used some light sandpaper to clean off the rough edges.

Sarah, Jessica and Parker. Cute. Still, I liked it.

Sarah, Jessica and Parker. Cute. Still, I liked it.