All Comments on 'Witch's Wedding'

Ridiculous.

What kind of dumbass thinks up this shit?

What kind of feminist nonsense is this, covered with a magical husk? You won't wait for it, bitches! Only in your unrealizable fantasies.

Who married them? Some warlock? Is this "The Lord of the Rings" episode? Should be in another category! 1*

It might have worked, written in 1st or 3rd person. Doesn’t work for me in 2nd.

Crap.

"My thanks bitch is learning you are insane soon enough to get the marriage annulled. I wasn't under your spell, I just decided to play along and see what kind of demented whore you really were. Damn, some women are just beyond stupid! Bye!"

Just say no to second person perspective.

Lost me with the first word. Second person stories suck.

Probably be better in Mind Control.

Parts are true and parts are total BS.

No that was real strange.

Shouldn't this be in fantasy? Not digging it... at all.

Guess that’s why they burnt witches back in the day, manipulative, evil, entitled - god, we are surrounded by witches and we never realised.

Best get those fires lit, we’ve some burning to do.

On a lighter note, not sure why it’s in LW although there’s many a manipulative entitled bitch there but many other catalogues for your fantasy take.

Superior female power? Never met a woman yet whose shot didn’t stink

Not a bad story, pretty good actually, would be better in the correct category. I would think fetish or perhaps sci-fi

Man , I loved the romantic magical hypnosis here . The male here is literally me , wanted to be lovingly dominated by my wife, I know it's impossible to trust someone even more than yourself to be completely dominated but I still felt it and fantasized about making it a reality. Let's see how ll it go