All Comments on 'With One Step Ch. 02'

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Plainly_JanePlainly_Janeabout 16 years ago
Nice update

<i>She was distracted by one of her passions, an older man. In this case, the older man in question was her instructor, Gilles Moreaux. He had an undeniable presence , every time he entered the room, Mila practically swooned. Tall and dapper, he dressed meticulously, every dark hair in place. He still favored the old-world approach in his professional dress and a suit was de rigeur for him. There was a slight graying at the temples, but his dark eyes still sparkled with youth and vitality, plus there was a kindness about his face Mila found irresistible. He was possessed of a firm jaw and commanded the attention of everyone when he entered a room – Mila knew he'd ensnared her and she was most happily caught.</i><br><br>

Oh yeah, oh yeah. Reminds me of a certain professor of philosophy who rocked my world when I was in college. (Only, lucky me, mine wasn’t married)<br><br>

<i>Despite being a tad short on funds, Mila decided to take a Taxi to the Moreaux residence, so she wouldn't have any chance of getting mussed up or attacked.</i><br><br>

I think this was wise, considering she was braless with a sheer black top on ;) <br><br>

<i>Sometimes, she even over-acted a bit as she did so – the silly creatures seemed to really get off on that. She often pondered how odd it was that men seemed to be ruled by their cocks.</i><br><br>

Hmmmm, this made her less likable to me. There's a tone of contempt in that thought, "silly creatures." Nice update, I liked that you included, where appropriate, French words and phrases.

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