All Comments on 'With Strings Attached Ch. 14'

thank you for taking up the story again

It is great to see the return of one of my favorite series of all time. I look forward to the next chapter.

I like the way you brought Janet back into the fold as Nicole's wife, but I think that you are using Alice as a whore instead of Nicole's girlfriend, she doesn't seem to care about her as much as when she first took her virginity. She seems happy that she is being manipulated by everyone, She should be with her more instead of pawning her off to whoever.

I'm just waiting for Alice to finally snap and start knifing every one of these malignant tumors infesting her life, starting with Susan.

I am glad you came back to this story. Please continue. Your writing is superb.

Love it! Please keep writing this or any other story you like, if this one has bored you.

Solid writing, though I think this latest chapter is just a prelude to the darker times coming.

I like the psychological aspect of the story, seeing how the women are reacting to what they are going through. And the misunderstandings have been quite humorous.

i can't wait to read more it's an great story

best erotic story ever, don't stop please!!!

When are we going to get the next chapter?! Its just the best erotic series ever. Please don't ever stop. I get so hot reading your stories!

Really hoping you continue this story!

I feel so sad for Nicole, if she knew Alice was forced into doing these things she would probably have a breakdown.

Chapter 14 seemed to regain some of the spark that has made this such a great story. Please write more.

Seriously, I don't know how she hasn't snapped and tried to kill herself or at least her blackmailer. Her so called girlfriend is nearly as bad, whoring her out to whomever.

You don't have to do this but for the next chapter you should have Alice become the cheer-predator, but have it in a way that she is whored out to them and becomes like the team whore for the school year

Your (love) story is the best I have ever read on this website. I would love to see Alicia get the better of Nicole sometime soon. I also have noticed that Nicole does not have passionate love making with Alicia. Can't wait for your future stories to be published. Good Luck. You have a great talent, please use it for your fans.

Alice should become a "cheer-predator" and seduce members of the cheerleading squad into having lesbian sex with her. She becomes Nicole's proxy and participate in manipulating other girls into doing wicked and depraved activities.

Without anybody pulling her strings, she unintentionally seduce a girl to undress for her then end up sleeping with her.

you capture the feel of subservance so smoothly, keep up the good work

you have taken this to far there is only to ways out for this young lady one is snap the other is killing her self.Putting a 18 year old that is that soft through that much the only way out she would see is death.sad but that is the true end of this story.

Really liked certain aspects of the story. Hoping you continue it and don't leave it unfinished. Personally hoping Alice get retribution as she has been going through a pretty fucked up life. Her mother, her friends, her colleges, etc have all used her and mind fucked her. Hoping that if Nicole truly loves her she gives up her crazy fantasies and settles with her as lovers and not mistress and sub . Otherwise I'd like to see Alice get revenge on everyone who has used her for their own bidding. Please continue the story.

Been nearly a year since the last installment, please try and finish the series it was so good, and for it to not have an ending would be injustice. You can do it.

Please do not continue writing. Thank You

Please continue with your story

I hope you're planning on writing more!

Have you finished the story? If you have well it sucks not to get an conclusion, but great work none the less. If you still plan on continuing please reply and let the readers know. A lot of people have been waiting for a few years now. The story was written so well with great development. Don't let Alice story go unfinished.

Yor storie is awful,sensless,I think your mind is away when you write.You are into but you know nothing about bondage,a long time bondage can hurt severly the blood circulation, why the fuck can Alice sleep tide up al night and more and more......I dont liked

your storie and suggest stop writing this stupiditis VERGILIUSCS

Please continue this story. It's been too long since you updated it. I hope you someday decide to continue this story. I still hope for Alice to escape her fate.

Are u done? Have you given up? If so that sucks, the story had no proper ending. If not, and it was some personal issue, hope you can work it out and either confirm your not available to complete the story, or give a date of when to expect you to give next installment. Please reply, a lot of people have been waiting for better part of a year, and if your done, it's cool. Just let us know if you have time. Thanks

Your a quitter. Piss off, you cant just half ass stuff in life. What a flop. Don't quit your day job

Once he pictures were out then susan had no power left. It would also be easy to show she did not want this. Logic of your story which was blackmail is gone. Why would she continue. A teenager put into this situation would sooner kill themselves than continue. The brain cannot handle it the ridicule and embarrasment. If the main Tennant of your story is gone the story must end. Blacmail no longer a threat, then she stops.

I have no idea why people are negative about this series. It is wondefully perverted and is a great read.

I adore the sinister theme as Alice and Janet are slowly but surely trapped more and more.

Maybe because it is so good - everyone wants the story to be perfect for them? All I know is nothing that is free is ever prefect. Please keep writing!

Nicole and Janet’s faux wedding was some of the most erotic writing I have ever read. I loved Nicole taking Janet’s wedding rings away and locking them up. Following the wedding confirmation, I was disappointed that Nicole did not do something to formalize the wedding, like using her riding crop on Janet’s bare bottom to teach her of her new obedient position in life. Also, a nice tattoo on Janet’s bare mons saying, “Property of Nicole,” or a branded “N” on Janet’s left bottom cheek would have been proper. Love the story so far, keep it up. J.