by TemptedAngel
I really enjoyed reading the love scenes... more please!! :) Can't wait to see how, Shayna reacts to the news of his wolf. lol She's gonna kick his azz!
Zee~
but you leave so long between chapters that it makes it hard to follow. You have to go back and reread chapters to remember all the characters and details. If you updated regularly it would be more enjoyable to read. Hoping for another chapter soon.
He has some serious explaining to do. And what's with all this sex and no protection?
Just to comment on taking long to post. That's okay we all have lives, and other priorities, so i understand.
I simply love this story, Jake needs to pucker up and tell his mate what/who he is..lol. Thanks
great story so far. can't wait for more to come. please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter. can't wait to find out shayna's reaction when she wakes up!!
I for one hope that she accepts him and is not freaked out with the whole wolf thing and is happy to finally make sense of the pull she feels towards him and is willing to be his mate. As she knows she doesn't want to live without him.
I am really enjoying your story. I just hope there won't be so much time between this chapter and the next as there has been between your other chapters. Keep doing what you do.
Cant wait for the next chapter please make it sooner the later
Cant stop screaming more more or i will jump from a clifff.. Hahahaa classicly good. I have no good comparison. :D Please hurry i pray ur pc stays in good health.
Love the series! Like every one else, hope the next chapter is up very soon. Love the chemistry between the characters and the development of a story line in addition to the HOT sex ;) Would like the next chapter to move the story along a little more....Shayna's either gonna have to learn the truth or at least learn more about/meet more of Jake's peoples...something....ANYhoo....you're a talented writer....Can't wait to read MORE!!!
i really like your series but can you make the time between chapters not so long i had to actually go back and reread a little bit cause i forgot what was goin on since it had been about 2 months since i had read the last chapter
But I can't remember who Marisa was and why that other dude was looking for her and I was entirely to lazy to back read,lol so I anywhoo I probably figure it out in the chapters to come or just bite the bullent and reread,lol.
Those erotic scenes are crazy good loved it and keep up the good work. Please to be so long for the next chapter. I'm already feenin LOL
Thanks sugaangel
But I can't remember who Marisa was and why that other dude was looking for her cause I was entirely to lazy to back read,lol. So I anywhoo I probably figure it out in the chapters to come or just bite the bullet and reread,lol.
Those erotic scenes are crazy good loved it. Keep up the good work. Please don't be so long for the next chapter. I'm already feenin LOL
Thanks sugaangel
from my previous one, but anyways wow this is soo good, incredible love it!!
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I adore your story and the skillful way you develop the characters so it is not all about sex (that gets old after awhile). I love your characters and can't wait for you to post more, and soon I hope!
All of your story's Have been from very Good to great.
When can we get More of them???
Good story,but has been a while since you last posted,just wondering if an ending might be coming soon,thanks.
I really enjoyed the chapter but the cliff hanger ending is making me really want an update. Here's hoping that the next chapter is already making it's way to us.
I hope you post the next one soon. I can't wait to read it. Pretty pretty please do it soon.
I truly enjoy your story. I love the characters and how you've developed them, and the balance of plot and sex...perfect! Please post more soon!!!
I agreed with all others fantastic storyline I just wish the next part would hurry up and be posted because I am dying to read it and I am sure more people want the same thing
I adore your story and can't wait till you post more... so please post more very soon!!!
so when will you come bless us with another chapter of awesomeness Please!!!
In the next part of the story, I can already hear these words...
Lucy????? You got some 'xplanin to do!
Darling-
You make a little restraint look positively tantalizing...hummmmmm. Loved this chapter....lovely is an understatement. Have to step out for a power walk, but will hurry back for the next chapter and a glass of wine.
Love your magic.....and that whole knot thing just blows my mind.
feel the heat of them, as well as the despair of the love struck St. Simon and hos desire to locate his mate. Is she one of the women that rode to Jake's club that 1st night. I wonder???
This story jus keeps gettin better n better except i am kinda lost i mean i kn they mated right but where is the bite its kinda missin.....anywho it was still great even the sex scenes.......i jus love those....
xoxo
Aria
You are a fantastic writer, you really do have a gift for storytelling. I have enjoyed this story a lot so far, but one thing that keeps bugging me is, why do they keep having unprotected sex? She lost her virginity to him and they didn't use a condom. I know that when I lost my virginity- even with a condom- the first thing that i thought the next morning was, "Could I be pregnant??" And Shayna hasn't even thought about it yet. They have had sex multiple times, and each time, he came inside of her, and yet neither one of them is worried about her being pregnant. It doesn't really make sense.