All Comments on 'Women's Studies Ch. 01'

You build up the scenes well, don't waste time moving on with the story and the characters aren't boring. The sex was a little rushed, I would have preferred a mutual masterbation scene instead but on the whole, better than most stories submitted here.

This was a wonderful read . Very hot had me worked up in no time lol . Please continue to write about these two . Loved it .

Chapter 2 is already in the works and I plan on making this a lengthy series.

And for the anonymous person who said this was gay bait, I'm not precisely sure where Lexi will end up. He is still working out who he is when he is Lexi. However, since there is incest in this story I have categorized it as such.

Thank you for the votes and comments.

I don't think I've ever been as envious of someone in an erotica as I am of Lexi. Taboo stuff pushes my buttons already, but... being able to transform into a beautiful woman, and still having the option of turning back would be amazing.

please continue this series and soon. As far as the gay bait.. well I would prefer he be straight as Alex and go for girls as lexi. but I'm not writing it. I think the playtime should continue with the sister and she can teach him so much.

great story. please continue. please ignore all the non anonymous trolls.

I loved everything about this story. Please keep it in excited for the next chapter

Loved this story and your detailed build up for each part of the story. Hope Lexi gets with his (her) sister again and maybe they even get to share another girl and perhaps even share a guy.

Three stars. Good story, but far too many errors.

Fantastic story! Your mind must be a devioua place and I loved every bit of it. The pacing and the set-up had me going from halfway through the first page, PLEASE keep writing and know it is very much appreciated!

I need a good editor. It was hard as hell finding any editor being a new writer and this being my first story. That being said, I am looking for a new editor. Most preferably one who enjoys the genres I am using.

I would also like to thank the voters and all the commenters (both public and private). you guys have definitely made it worth it.

Son_of_Battles

Son_Of_Battles - I would love to be an editor for you and this category is my favorite on the site. Feel free to contact me about editing any future stories. I will have no problem providing a quick turnaround time.

I love the story. Looking forward to Chapter 2 to see what Lexi gets into.

Great story! Personally, I hope that Alex/Lexi doesn't start going for guys, then I would have to drop out. Do your thing though, whatever makes you happy! Maybe you could explore the guy on guy action a little further in another series.

For all of you hoping that this story will not be a one-off, I have finished writing the second chapter. I am just waiting for it to be edited (yes I have one of those now) and it will be posted soon. Thanks for supporting a new writer.

SoB

Wow, what a start. Very sexy, and a nice enjoyable, flowing read. Loved the story line and the characters. Now on to the next chapter!

AWSOME

... and a turn-on too!

Hot & sexy!

I want to be Lexi!

I would love to be Lexi, or Jennifer or Diane.. just to be a beautiful girl like that and accepted... yes, I would be Lexi and be one of the girls full time..

One of the best stories I've read. However, I felt there should have been a steady build up of the relationship between lexi and Audrey over more chapters as that was really special and should have happened closer to the end as a climax and with greater anticipation

I followed one of my own readers over here and found a wonderful and talented story teller! Great premise and believable in a fantasy sort of way...and that's what this site is all about. I think you did really well with all of the details of transforming Alex into Lexi. I didn't notice any major editing problems as was mentioned above and thought it was actually very crisp and clean??? Great job for a first effort, in my opinion. I'll favorite this so I can catch up on the next chapters. (5 stars from me ;)

I loved this story and as a long time mainly closet crossdresser it struck so many chords with me. I loved it all. We all have dreams and I'll no doubt be adding some of your story into mine the next time I'm lying on my bed in silky night attire and eyes closed! Georgia xx

in more ways than one. the final fuck could have had a bit more pathos, but i'm just nitpicking: this is the best i've read here on this site.

I read this and liked it so much that I now must read the rest of this series. Very well done and holds ones interest extremely well and also very plausible. Good job.

There has to be more about going to an all girls college... More problems to be worked out i the future.

This story is fantastic! I created this account just so that I could leave you a heartfelt comment. I have read stories on this site for a few years now and this is the first time any of them spoke to me. I tend to just hit the story spinner, read it and move on, but this time I feel a compliment is in order. I feel like the story was written for me because of the strong connection I have to the content. I am an at home closet CD that my partner knows about and supports. The descriptions and emotional state of Lexie are spot on! I have experienced some of these myself. I love the attention to detail in the story without it being gross or gaudy. The pacing is done very well and the length is long enough to get a good feel for the characters and not so long that's is filled with pointless words. I wish that I was Lexie for whom I'm massively envious.

I know this is the first in the series and I will be devouring the others in short order. Keep up with the fantastic writing and I will be reading everything you publish. Thank you sincerely for this story. I can't wait to read more about Lexie and her adventure.

Simply lovely. Omg, the pacing was great. The character development was touching, and the sex... well, verrrry hot. I'm going to read the rest of the series.

Whatever else you do in life, wherever you may go, please continue to write. Such talent ought to be shared. Thanks for sharing with us.

To this story. Ah, that I were young again so I could have this fun once more.

DO keep writing. You have a wonderful talent, it just in the sex part but in making characters believable...the situations as well.

Btw, I loved the 'soul IS' discussion too. I also wish I'd understood that when I was younger, as well. Peace.

This is one of those stories where I'll read the whole series for the amazing characters you have built rather than the mindless erotica that I read on this site usually. Simply amazing!!!

Nicely written with good pacing and character development. And unlike way too many stories here, you proofread.

Can't wait to dive into the rest!

That was incredible. I can't wait to check out the other chapters in this story. I'm sure she will, but Lexi absolutely must have sex with a man. She is awesome!

Thank you for the story. I'm positive that I will enjoy this even more as the story unfolds.

I started this because I liked the first two stories I read of yours. Now, I am interested in reading more of this series. Not what I would have been drawn to but I admit I'm curious to see where it goes.

wow!!

Great story and characters. Hard as hell and precum was flowing

It was an amazing event! I can attest to the feelings of being gay or straight! However, once I dressed in women's clothes I gravitated towards the female gender thinking I might be a lesbian! Audrey's statement of "The mind follows the body but the soul is". As Lexi viewed her body she was a girl! Paraphrasing Audrey..."Your soul is the same as it always has been! But who you are is still who you are! Everyone else get their whole lives to be themselves. Who are they to stop you from being yourself?" Those words meant a lot to me! I had to leave my feelings behind to satisfy my families persona of being a man, father, and grandfather! I spent a year leaving it all behind but I just can't do that because as Audrey said of her brother...you have to be yourself! With the help of Audrey she set Lexi FREE! I've said to much but the story follows close to many crossdressing/ trans women...as I am trans! Son_ of_Battles Thank you! On to 11 more chapters!

Now i definitely see why your story is in the hall of fame. Hope you write a novel and i can be the one to get your first signed copy. Love your work. Hugs

That was smoking hot! My panties are dripping. I had to stop reading twice to milk my precum for a tasty treat. Can't wait for the next segment.

Great story!

Very good, and sensitive. Some cds still prefer to be straight, but enjoy the feel of sexy lingerie. Never been out in public but I use web-sites to interact with shemales. I wish I had known about ts and tg a long time ago. Life might have turned out differently.

Awesome, looking forward to more

Loved it. I love crossdressing love fucking as a CD. This story had me hard all the way everything flows so sensually and sexily.

Dressing is just an unbeatable sensation. Love it.

The subject says it all, and that from someone who is a 0 on the Kinsey scale. I lost a bet and had to spend an evening out with my buds CD, not my thing fortunately, as I was told I looked like a white boy impression of Wesley Snipes in To Wong Foo, i.e. not at all cute, but I believe everyone should be allowed to enjoy their own kinks, just don’t force them on others without their permission. Great writing, and hella hot buildup to the smoking finish. I’ve never looked into cross dressing lit, as it’s not my thing usually, tag search fooled me, but great writing is great writing and I enjoyed your take on it. The story premise was well done and believable enough to keep my interest.

great start ! sorry to be short but im on to ch 2

I really enjoyed it. I read some comments on your latest chapter and just had to check it out. This is not my community, but you've illuminated things so well, and your characters are so believable, that it makes me interested to read more. Thanks.

Your premise is so interesting I can't wait to see it expanded on. The build-up between the sister and brother was so intensely hot, especially the repeated masturbation scenes. Please keep writing.

Trying not to include a spoiler.......

Great story, but for me, it started going off the rails 2/3 of the way through. Being the inclination I am, Lexi’s discovery of her interests just didn’t flow in my mind. I could imagine myself as Lexi up to that point. But hey, thats just me. Overall, I was obsessed with the story until I finished it.

That being said, in general I loved it. Really decent writing, love the premise (I had a similar fantasy), keep it up (no pun intended).

LS

I read the complete series, it is just... great! Thanks a lot!

Made me think in directions I would have never imagined on my own.

You are a great writer and I wish you all the best as a writer in the future.

Can't wait to get through the whole series! FANTASTIC story!

it deserves to NOT have a word omission in the first ~100 words. It's worth the PITA a resubmission can be.

"Our mother had found out from some of her male co-workers that Audrey had been making money as a "cam-girl" lost it."

"...as a 'cam-girl' and lost it."

Also, the quotes around cam-girl should be apostrophes, in situ, as well.

Look forward to the rest...

Thank you for pointing that out Anon. I recently went through and re edited the shit out of all of WS, but there are likely still some errors floating around like this one. I should be able to fix it rather quickly, especially since you've told me exactly where my error is. :)

Fantastic story.

Well written, with lots of the elements that float my boat. A single story about; transvestism, the frustration of not getting girls (or boys), bi wondering and to cap it all a healthy dose of brother/sister incest.

Although a fantasy, just enough realism for me to be able to suspend disbelief and really enjoy Lexi becoming the person I wish I could be.

Fabulous

Thank you

I like the idea of the transformation feeling natural, and being bisexual

Hi, just wanted to let you know this little error is still there that another guy had already pointed out:

"Our mother had found out from some of her male co-workers that Audrey had been making money as a "cam-girl" lost it."

"...as a 'cam-girl' and lost it."

Also, the quotes around cam-girl should be apostrophes, in situ, as well.

A Great Story!

Why can't I forget this story and read it all over again. :,(

Its my favourite .... ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Not sure I know why I’ve never read Women’s Studies despite you being, for my tastes, one of the best writers on this site - and knowing that I’ve found every single one of your other stories hotter than hell. Maybe I was just nervous of loving something so long, maybe I was saving the best knowing I could only read it for the first time once.

I’m taking the dive now and my goodness this first chapter is exactly as deeply, deeply sexy as I’d wanted. Hitting all the best notes. I’m hungry for wherever it goes next.

I read the first page. Idk if this story is going to be about trans discovery or crossdressing. If it's about a trans woman, we do not get horny and then have a desire to jerk it after seeing ourselves in fem clothing. Euphoria boners are a real thing but they are very quickly followed by revulsion and disgust. Not a wank.

I was hesitant about the premise at first, but that was great. Looking forward to reading the whole series now! Fantastic work.

WOW, I love it. 5 Stars. Such a well written and told story. I am so looking forward to reading the entire story. Thank You for taking the time to write this. Awesome

i loved this story so good thanks

is there more?

Nicely told. A few typos or grammatical errors but mostly well done. Sex scene could have been hotter.

Loving this série. Wowww I can spend days reading this. It makes me wet all the time

Hot so far!!! Got my attention

I'm absolutely loving this story so far and it's just the first chapter..! The build up was so good and the interaction between the siblings was amazing. Such a turn on that I couldn't help but edge myself to it more than once. I'm excited to read the rest now~!

Chapter 2 was so amazing and such a turn on. The slow build up and having Alex finally giving in to his sister and dressing up for her. Fuck that was such a hot moment and I felt so jealous of him~! It's a shame that the lewd scenes didn't last longer but they were enough for make me edged a couple of times and more.

Really well written, I'm very excited to read the next chapter and see what lewd fun the siblings get up to.

Loved Chapter 3 as much as the previous ones! They have such wholesome chemistry together, although their sexual scenes are such a big tease. Driving me crazy imagining all the possibilities..! I edged twice, once to both their lewd scenes and I'm looking forward to more~!