by Ryswell
Thank you, I loved reading these Diana and Zatanna chapters, but the story itself is really well conceived and written. Wonder Woman has always been my favorite hero, and lord knows a constant in my fantasies. What I love about this story is that it's exactly how I always thought a successful magic/mind control attempt on Wonder Woman would have to happen. The problem with magic/mind control on superheroes is that they always fail because they a forceful attempt to dominate the indomitable, so they fail. But this is more of a softer or subtle control. Yes, it's magic, there are protections in place, and she is under his control; but she is being dominating not by the magic but by genuine love, admiration, and great sexual chemistry....things a hero, a warrior, a princess, an Amazon....would naturally resist and not allow into their lives. She's not being dominated, she's experiencing the things she has rejected her entire life and learning she loves it all. This guy opened her body, mind, and spirit to a happiness she didn't know she needed and wanted. So thank you for a great story, and I can't wait to see where you take it further. There's a lot of DC to explore with these two as a power couple.
I was hoping at the end Z would duplicate Mark so both the ladies could enjoy his manhood at the same time.
I like the new spinoff of your other story maybe you could also add Black Canary to this storyline as well.
I do hope you continue adding JL members to Mark's little harem
Wonder Woman
Zatanna
Black Canary
mayne next
Supergirl
Fire
Jessica Cruz
Powergirl