All Comments on 'Wonderful Evening!'

Excellent story, keep up the writing.

This is a hot scene. I would like to know more about what you were feeling and thinking, as well as the description of what happened. This is not something that happens every day!

Thank you for the story. The line was excellent. However poor grammar: verb subject agreement,sentence structure; made the reading "bumpy". Still an enjoyable read with great use of descriptive language. Thanks again.