All Comments on 'Wonderfully in Love'

The bones of the story were good but I think a change in viewpoint would make it better. Someone else telling the story removes us farther from the characters and makes it harder to get in the story.

I got a nice hard-on reading your story but felt like I didnt get enough time to know any of your characters. Sweet sex between two nice men is wonderful. Just wish it had been longer. I promise to read it twice so I can jerk off thinking about Larry's nice cock.

It was very good, however it moved a little fast and perhaps you should rethink some of the word choices. Other than that it was really enjoyable.

aaaaww, so sweet!

Their love story was very sweet. I wish we all could find that kind of love.

sweet little piece...i love it.

Very exciting

No seduction pure love

So lucky to find love.