All Comments on 'Wood Spirit Ch. 06'

A little unexpected for this story line. The Spirit goes out of his way to want this woman, claim her and dominate her, but then does nothing for her in the end.

I didn't expect that The Spirit would end up to be the entire village's master.

What a different story, the whole spirit-thing, wow. It was a tragic end but if they had lived happily ever after, the story wouldn't have been so unique. Well done

So the story is very interesting, and I love the idea of such an intimate connection with Nature, but it was irritating and distracting to stumble on the misuse of the apostrophe for the possessive 'its'. The apostrophe should be used only when indicating the omission of a letter or letters; in this case 'it is.' Please consider this very constructive criticism; I admire your creativity.

The ending is shitty as fuck..although I kinda had a feeling that was what was going to happen! But what doesn't make to me is why he would call her his mate when he fucked other women and is just going to let her die after giving birth to his fucking child. Plus he also said that those invisible children are hers to command and she is there master.....was that only until she gave birth to his child so he could leave her to die, also the village people don't care even after they called her there mother are the villagers going to find a another unwilling women so they can get goods to keep them from getting taken themselves and used until they die...how fucked up!!!!!!!

what a horrible horrible ending!!!!