All Comments on 'Words on Skin'

This is the best piece of erotic literature I have read so far. absolutely amazing work

Once again, wonderfully written. I didn't get imu, but I had the sneaking suspicion that Chip didn't exist. Just how she talked about him, he seemed to only be there so she could torment Scooter. Beautiful story. Way to bring narrative to sex, romance to sex, like few I've seen.

I picked up on the imu but i also have done the trace letters and symbols on different areas wonderful story

I came three times

Wow! That was fantastic. I'd love to see a continuation :D

the only thing i could think of for imu was i miss u but that didnt make sense...but this is one of my fav stories...great work

Beautifully written, wickedly told and very arousing.

This is way better than the common wank stories...it's obvious you're a pro. It's a pleasure to read such a truly well-written piece, thank you. Btw, I suspected the heart after its 2nd or 3rd mention...I've had enough girls write I <3 U on my palm to know it can easily feel like an "m"...lol

The first thing that came to my mind was "i miss u" but it was not in the correct place..so i thought again and i figured it was " im urs"..but the end make sense to me

U r a very good writter, I like the sequence of the series and definately the way u wrote the story. As they saud before it was a pleasure reading a story like that and this is the first time i vote for a story..u r really a professional and I would ve honored to read more of ur stories. I can say it a sex story only coz its not dirty ( no matter what is the relation between the couple)..it has passion, love, pleasure and most sensual..its not my job to tell u if its gd or not but i only say one thing for u: Keep going like that..

Best Regards,

A fan

The climax and ending made my sister lose it.

Beautiful story, wonderfully told. We loved it. Thank you for writing it.

-Chris & Meg

It'll all be okay. You should read some more porn, though. That'll cheer you up. :p

Not much I can say now, what with the myriad comments already out there. But I will say this is some of the best literature (not just erotica) I have read. And it makes me wish I had a younger sister... ;-)

Also, since Chip didnt exist, who did Liz lose her virginity to?

This is one of the best stories I have read this one kept me up until 3:00 in the morning you are a fantastic writer and need to do more stories (not just erotica but like books) in the end I actually thought she died (idk how lost in the story I guess lol) you write like a lot of the best book writers do you start off slow then really get going keep it up this one was more than Amazing

That was just simply amazing writing and every interaction was adorable and sexy and just wow. You did amazingly well on this story and frankly I'm sure anything you write is just as great!

This was so fucking good i cant believe how good this was you need to wright more.

i am so glad i read this it was amazing

I am a female, so of course I figured it out since the begining and what's more, so did my normally slow hubby! We both loved the story and hope u write more in future. YOU ROCK!!!!

Beautifully detailed descriptions incorporated into writing that flows. Well Done.

This was one of the best stories that I have read on here. Just great description and detail.

WOW !!!!! Great story it kept me rivited from start to finish. That's how you write an erotic story. Great job once again and keep up the good work. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

Loved it. Was amazing.

Thought imu was clever I was trying to figure it out and needed to keep reading to know for sure.

Definitly hot, helped me out :)

Nice work

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. Though I did figure out what you were doing with it, it took me much longer than it usually takes to figure out other plot lines. You had me going for a good while. Thank you for the read. I hope to read more from you soon.

Great job. I like that it was an actual story, a story that was easy to get sucked into, instead of a cheap jerk off one.

As much as I saw the whole "no chip" coming, it was still a great story to read, and no, I didn't get the "imu" until the end.

The story line was phenominal! I agree with others. It is a riveting story with lust, passion, love, and a happy ending. I have been readin Taboo literotica for over a year and not one story compares in the thrill, the excitement, the emotion of this one. Although Taboo, like this, is seen negatively by society I think it's perfectly normal.

Keep up the good work!!!!!

We can't help who we fall in love with. I know I couldn't. ;)

Absolutely amazing. I did see the no chip thing coming and no I couldn't figure out what i m u meant before the end. I have a weakness for incest and this brother sister love story is my FAV. Very well written

Beautiful, thoughtful and a true story. Well thought out and balanced, lustful yet restrained and brought to a delicious climax. Kudos to this author.

Loved it! Yes, i figured out what Imu was early on. Beautifully written, well done!

Masterfully done! You dont come across something like this often. The personal details and intimate stories such as her dingo background and their moments when they were younger were compelling. I did find out what imu meant before the end, during the part right before the afternoon nap (you were practically shoving the answer into our faces there). The no Chip ending was also obvious, but that was more likely due to how most incest stories end with the brosis becoming a pair, even with your hints aside (chip who? moment during one of their scenes and his comment on her tightness). Well written regardless, good job!

this story was very well wrote

Bravo! I grasp your every word without losing my grip! BRAVO!

Thank You,

Ceeja,

Northern Cal

ceeja1@yahoo.com

This was by far, no challenge way so ever, THE BEST story I have ever read, erotic or otherwise. It grabbed my attention fully and was so much more than a sex story. I loved the mystery of the "imu" even after I figured out it meant I love you half way through. The ending pulled at all my heartstrings and damn-near made me ball like a baby. I hope this is not the only story u have written like this cuz I would love to read more. And you should really try to get this published and in book stores somehow. I would be first on line to buy it. I am now you very loyal fan.

~Ember

Have to say, I never really liked incest stories before, but after reading your's I am entirely hooked. "Words on Skin" has to be one of the best stories I've read-erotic or otherwise. Written brilliantly, with some mystery, lots of humor, and plenty or perfectly-paced erotism. I love it.

This was the most amazing story I have ever read, your style us better than ANYBODIES I have ever had the pleasure of reading, all of your stories are more then just "I fucked her hard, she moaned loud... My name is John and I fycked her hard... It was awkward at dinner... The end" yours have a story and a thrill and its thenperfect combo I love your stories :)

Character development is something usually lost in these types of stories. Not so with "Words on Skin", The very title evokes a rush, and the "imu" puzzle got me thinking the first time it was referenced, though I figured it out by time two. I loved the references to her running, the coach, and their childhood. The stories within this story like the "bawoo", the elaborate Chip thing, and skin writing on long car rides added great depth and made the read so much more enjoyable. Get this published. I would buy it.

Hey man I liked it...it was very nice and u can't just leave us hanging man how does it end?..does she tell her mom and do they go on living together in a house or an appartment. Somewhere and do they keep fucking like crazy and does he maybe get her prego and they start a family I mean let us know .

This, is simply art. If you would leave the detailed sex out, you could sell it as a normal book - I'd definately buy it anyways.

great story, imu keep me reading. and bawoo keeps me thinking about it.

only thing i think it got abit involved with the fact she set everything up at the end but thats only my opinion.

great work

I was linked here by a good friend who knows my weakness for amazing stories in this delightfully kinky genre.. and I must say that I was wonderfully surprised by it. As a girl(not terribly brilliant, but im getting there) the IMU puzzle got me the first few times.. until i started thinking hard about it, and was like 'ha ha silly boy' I think its more obvious to girls.. who are more inclined to sign things with <3's.. but the story overall was wonderful.. well written, damn sexy.. and oh-em-gee hawt. You're an amazing author and I hope to read more from you. Also I like the lack of total closure.. I personally hate the 'white-picket-fence happily-ever-after' wrap ups a lot of incest stories have. I -like- envisioning the characters still sneaking about happily =p so.. cheers, spot on for me!

i loved the story. it kept me wanting to come back till i finishe the whole thing. thank you so much for making it interesting!!!! <3

Well written, intelligent and erotic as hell. Great job, keep it up!!

What a stunningly beautiful erotic story. Left me totally turned on. Oh, and I'm a girl but I didn't get the "imu" either. Numpty.

This story is, by far, the most incredibly beautiful, erotic, and amazing story I have ever had the pleasure to read. I loved it. I sincerely hope you make more like this. It was incredible.

Fantastic story. Thank you for the amazing read.

Even though I should be sleeping already once I started reading your amazing story I just couldn't stop. Love it

This is probably one of the best stories that i have come across on this site and it would be awsome if there were another chapter too it. By the way i figured out what the "imu" was the first time it was mentioned

I got the imu about the second time

Seriously, it was one of the best ever found here till now. Had everything, to the innocent playful childhood memories to lust for siblings, the fear of getting caught to the joy of having "fun" even in that situation, dumbness to smart brains, sad moments to stuff that honestly made me giggle esp on page six. Loved this one.

Would love to read more like this one. Bookmarked your page on all browsers.

Love,

sTr

*****

Amazing. You captured the emotions of both characters very well. And the first time I read the 'imu' thing I thought 'emu' too! Then by the second or third time I figured it was a heart. Most guys probably don't get it because they never draw hearts on paper and stuff, and the quickest and sloppy way of drawing a heart is to start from the bottom point, and finishing in one line. Girls do this all the time, so yeah, boys would never get it. ;)

Loved it! I didn't get the 'imu' at all until you explained it in the end. I thought it was i miss you and then i was really confused. I absolutely loved 'bawoo' I want that to be my new word lol. Keep writing!

Shaking my head as to how I didn't get imu. Well played sir.

I always have tears in my eyes at Lizzie's final bawoo. Just plain a story of love.

I guessed imu quickly when Lizzie started using it in conversation.

Loved the whole mood and the final bawoo :)

Do write more!

good until the sucky end to many holes left open as usual. don't mention things unless you fully explain them the whole mom and boyfriend thing needs to be finished PROPERLY. the sucky end kills the story as usual for this writer.

Why can"t people like ,,,,,,,,,,just relax and enjoy the RIDE

Why must there always be someone like you ,people that never sign their name , but always make worthless comments about a writer.

To those people , I say,, Show us what you've got, show us how you write. show us what is in your mind.

ED

This has to be one of the best written love stories I have ever read and shame on those who think otherwise. Flawlessly written, with the absolutely best twist to "imu" at the end. A definite must read for any romance lover!

This is by far the most amazing story I've read on this site I've read it about 3 times and I still love it! Please write more like this!!!

Love the build up, and the "imu" was referenced just enough to remind me "what the Hell does that mean?" I don't think there are holes in the end, seems to me all the bases are covered. Great work, look forward to more. Thank you.

This is an absolutely beautiful story. Well written, fantastic descriptions, just great. Please keep up the writing. You rock!!!

Your story was absolutely beautiful. The brother-sister relationship was amazing. In fact, it made me miss my little sisters (They are in different states and are 6 and 7 years younger than me). I haven't lived with them since I was 12. The build-up for this was wonderful, you introduced everything in such a way that it was just another piece of beauty on what could be taken as a painting. Thank you for sharing it, and I would love to read more from you. I'll certainly go looking. I can't think of anything negative to say about it, so I'll leave it at that.

Absolutely beautiful, this could definitely be a romance novel. It was emotional, well developed, and above all, touching. Great work!

That was such a sexy story and really well written. I'm now going to look at your other stories!

WOW, that was so hot. Totally turned me on to anal.

And yep, imu, I figured it out. AND I'm a man (:

The right amount of background info, plus the sex scenes were super hot! The mom almost catching them added great suspense. In short, you nailed it!

That was one of the greatest stories ever written. I couldn't quit reading. Props dude. You have some talent. I would take your talent elsewhere though. Way to good to be doing it on here!! PROPSSSS

You could really feel the love between the siblings which made the story that much hotter. Really well written. Ps figured out the imu thing immediately!

Outstanding hot and tender story. Respect to you for a job well done.

This story is easily the best that I have ever read...My neighbor plays the piano and they are playing the perfect song for this stoy.

Long, loud, and sweet the piano song and this story. I give complete congrats to PacoFear for writing this story, it must have been hard to make it so long but it was definitly well thought out and a perfect story.

This story earned 5 stars but should have more like 20, but the best I can do is 5.

Anybody who reads this story should give it 5 stars because thats what it deserves

It took me a little while to figure out what "imu" ment at 1st but i still managed to figure it out before the big unveiling. I just love how you drew out what it really ment until the very end only dropping hints throughout the story.

This as an awesome story. Plenty of buildup and emotions. Lizzie was a hot little number and will need to have more written about!!!!

This was magnificent, really. Your characters are so believable, and so adorable. Their shy, gradual surrender to one another is tender, loving, and oh-so-hot! It's just one of those stories that I just know will stay with me, and I can't help thinking that Richard and Lizzie will have a long, happy, filthy future ahead of them!

Btw, my wife adored the story too, so, um, thanks for that;)

Wish I had a sister that loved me that much. More like enemies growing up and into early adulthood. Since my memories of our relationship are kind of rocky it was nice reading about someone that cared that much about her brother. Would love to hear more on this couple.

Absolutely amazing. This is far and away my favorite short story, erotic or otherwise. The ending makes me giggle like a schoolgirl, I'm so happy for them. The kind of pure, giddy happiness that I'm relieved to say still exists. I was smiling for hours after I finished it the first time. That there is how I've always pictured true love. Ba-woo!

I don't normally comment anywhere, but I really wanted to say this...thank you. A lot. You build stronger, more meaningful relationships in six pages than most authors can manage in thousands, and I think I'm a better person for having experienced them.

By the way...I'm a 25 year old male, and "imu" was a complete mystery to me until the end. Although I must admit, I was so engaged in the story that I didn't think think too much about it. I'm glad I didn't, too, because the way she reveals it gave me the shivers.

by far, the best sibling story i've ever read!! Really loved it. Thanks for sharing. .

Good read, enjoyed every page, sad to see it end.

I've read a lot of story's off this site and many other but by far the best I ever read and probly ever will read thank you from the bottom of my heart for sharing this wonderful story

Just saying it coulda been longer, good writing too. But I must say I am not that impressed.... The other sibling hall of fame story "Just the six of us" just set a new standard and your story doesn't meet it.

Reading this made me feel all mushy inside. Full of D'AAAAAAAWW moments. If Lizzie cried in his arms at the end, I don't know if my heart could take it.

I absolutely love it and I figered out the "imu" straight away and I thought it was brilliant. I loved the way how it was about the chase as well as the sex. Fab story I think one of my favourites that I have read :)

One of the better stories I have ever read. Aweesome has no idea what he is talking about. I tried to read his 'Hall of fame story." I read the first chapter and skimmed through others. I would say "6 Times a Day" puts that story to shame as well. I found it rather meh. Not a bad story, mind you, but it tries too hard. Seems like that story was written by a failed author with something to prove, which they still haven't done. If that story sets the standard, your story exceeded it. Keep up the good work.

Just loved it wanted more but all good stories comes to an end. Please keep writing more :)!

Yeah, i figured it out about the same time I figured out there was no Chip.When he mentioned Chip and she said "who?" I knew it that he had to imagery wrong all those years.

Absolutely fantastic story. The 'imu' had me confused the whole way through to be honest. I had a feeling Chip was fake when she said "who?" to her brother saying his name. I knew for sure when she said she hadn't had hard rough sex in a long time. Great story though.

I seldom comment on stories here although I most always vote on submissions when I feel they warrant it. This was a sweet story which was very well written. And no, I didn't catch the "Imu". After all, I'm just a dumb 'ol guy. Keep up the good work.....and thanks....it was a fun ride.

by far the best sibling seduction i've read. well written and thought out. bravo!

Very well written I hope to read more from you.

By the third page, I wasn't even in the mood anymore. You actually were able to pull my attention so well that I was more interested in the story unfolding than the sex. Bravo, sir. Bravo. And I mean it.

I feel proud to say I know why you called her dog girl :D haha. It was a lovely story. Well done :)

This was one of the first stories I read on here and by far one of my favorites for sure. It was amazingly well written and I loved the development of the characters. It was more than just the sex, it made me need to know how things worked out. Great Job!

This is my favorite story on literotica! I read it sometime in 2011 for the first time and now even after all this time it still ranks as the best story so far! Keep writing stories or go and get some published! Many people would enjoy your writing if they got the chance to read it. But anyway I love this story so keep on writing. ;)

I absolutely loved this story, your writing, even though anal sex is not one of my biggest thrills. I thoroughly enjoyed how well written and well developed this was. I loved the part in the beginning with Lizzie and cross country running, the coach's speech. The part where Richie caressed and rubbed her ass all afternoon seemed implausible to me, but long live our personal uniqunesses of appetite. I would not be surprised if in your business life you were someone like John Irving or some other highly recognized and successful author.

I never figured out the 'imu' but was close enough in meaning... I was guessing, I M urs, the way someone might text that. If I was more dedicated to it and a bit less lazy minded, I'd try to puzzle out your name, PacoFear. Frank someone.... But my lazy memory and lack of real literary grounding kind of handicap me there.

I look forward to reading the rest of your stories, though it's hard to hope they could be this good. Thanks so much for sharing this, for dedicating such time and thought to it! Typically I try to find stories written by real live women, so I appreciate muchly that you didn't stoop to the depths of borrowing a female identity to write from.

Doug. yrbluescureshere@yahoo.ca

Just as i said, HELL YEAH!

Amazingly sweet. I'll admit to figuring out the 'Imu' puzzle from the start. My own younger sister and I played stupid games like this when we were younger. Not words on skin specifically but she did have me stumped for the longest time calling me 'Su na mi' putting emphasis on the 'mi'. It was maddening but she finally gave in to my questioning the origin of the word. It was Tsunami.. she was just putting emphasis on a different syllable.

IMU

figured it out by the second page. Course we had an unfair advantage cuz we were reading an incest story on a porn site, but yeah.

I love love love this story, very well written and dirty and romantic all at once. I too figured it out by the second page :-)

I would love to see asequel to this very well written story

I got it about page 3 of the story, great to read really enjoyed it. Thanks for writing it!!!!

A part 2 or extension to the story as it is now, that'd let us know how the 'breaking up with Chip' goes, how they plan and move towards their future together... Maybe a twist of some kind, but a sequel or an additional, extended ending would make an excellent story even better. Just saying!

Cool stuff this. Figured out imu early on coz I found myself writing it out - then it hit...

I love this story, I read alot of romantic story's and this one is really good, the first time she wrote imu I kidda had an idea of what it meant, girls r to easy.... Second time I knew forsure, I think there should be a sequel plz. Great story