All Comments on 'Work Subordinate Becomes Bull'

put this in the right category u dumbshit

Please continue this story

What a build up. I will be following you, waiting for more.

I can't wait until the next chapter, beautiful start!

What an exciting tale ... made me want to be that husband submitting to a big black bull who fucks my wife ... oh, yeah, can hardly wait for the next chapter ... make the wife beg for it and make the white boss become the bull's slave ...exciting work..

One star. The leap from saying Master to being an experienced bull is too much. Actually you want to write about yourself experiencing black cock. Write about that and put it I the right category gay or anal.

I do really wish the pay off were in this post though. If nothing else it would make it so people couldn’t bitch about it being in the wrong category

From being respectful to being disrespectful and condescending to everyone is so much bullshit.

I don’t know any black men who are douchecanoes like the one you wrote.

Maybe you’re writing about your own personal fantasy, I don’t lnow, I won’t jusge; but seriously, at least try to keep it a little realistic? Might as well have been reading a fucking encyclopedia considering you killed my erection.

Stupid ass white boy.

This black bull going to fuck your sexy wife pregnant real soon

I would like me wife to the suck the he the list his come her when just come in came up donw how home

This was a great start. I was on the edge the entire time. I can not wait to see where this goes from here. The fun they will have with Jack both by themselves and on their own. It surely will be just a matter of time before they are begging for Jack to be with the children as well. Thank you for such a good story and please continue.

I have sucked and been fucked by BBC and yes it was good and I had females fist my sissy-pussy. yes I loved it and crave it now.

Looking forward to the next chapter of this story.

Good start to a story, but I feel the first sex conversation just want way too far, when only a few chapters earlier the guy had a problem using his bosses first name.

Still hot and well done. I look forward to more.

These Black men always have such large penises and the white women always want to be fucked by them.

On the other hand the white husbands are small and unable to satisfy their needs..

Perhaps they should have looked for a Black husband in the first place. L

that was such a hot story and am just dying to read the next instalment look everyday is it published soon. great writing skills mate don't make us wait too long mate.

If this was posted in Loving Wives category it would be scoring in the low 2 to 3 range, but the Moral Brigade rarely venture into reading stories in other categories.

Decidedly a missed opportunity to express their outrage.

Lue

I think I see a couple more chapters in the wings. Hope to read them soon.

Stupid dumb ass husband...you wanted to watch..that's the only way to Wife share..do it together...he should have been told if you want my wife then either I'm watching or its off..stupid author to not write this story the correct way...maybe you could republish with hubby present.. until then I won't read any further for this author...hate it..keep them together..do it right or not at all

Jerry Springer would frequently have black guys like your ‘Ed’ on his TV program DOMETOO. We’ve always thought Springer was attempting to perpetuate an idea of black men in particular, having absolutely no moral compass at all. I believe your story does so as well.

Good fiction - even erotica shouldn’t need a social stereotype as its lynchpin.