All Comments on 'Work Take Over Ch. 01'

Man, I love your style, and I love your stories. I like this particular concept, and I hope you will consider doing further adventures in this mind control setting. I'll be following you with anticipation!

very good work. I'd like to see...chapter 2...!

I would like to definatly see a sequil to this one

how does he do it

Needs More chapter's. if he can use this on anyone he could get Raise's Promotion's

Maybe work from home and get paid as a Consultant. as well as setting up a Harem using the Wife's and Daughter's of the Big Wigs.

I have a part of me that wants to be Asian. She hit my fantasy of submission & having a master take my mind directly. So want more.

I do t usually read mind control stories but this one was good.