All Comments on 'Working Late Ch. 03'

Amelie should try Jack -- he might be more loving and attentive in a kinder way! And he might be very attractive, sexy hairy-chested man!

Heartbreaking too. Poor Amelie, I didn’t think she was flirting with Jack, to me it made Karl act like a jerk. As for the fuck up at the end of the night, he’s an idiot. It was obvious that she felt rejected so to ease that he does what..pulls further away, idiot.

Brilliant writing, thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

Very nice development of the relationship, slow and steady and not dreamy ulor perfect. Real.