by amberbmaid
Liked it,, but where is the ending,,, There has to be heaps more you can write
I eagerly await for this story to continue to its obvious additional episodes .
Lots of spelling and grammar errors make the story hard to read. Nice domination story but I'd have to say the sub could be more realistically dealing with this rather than just going along all the time.
It's a nice start to the series, and quite a pre-dick-ament that Trista's new "Little Slut" is in already. Looking forward to reading the next Chapter.