All Comments on 'Working with Trista Ch. 01'

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tobytimtobytimover 12 years ago
Very Good

Liked it,, but where is the ending,,, There has to be heaps more you can write

FordzillaFordzillaover 12 years ago

More please. Great start.

pdv990pdv990over 12 years ago
Love it

Great writing, hope you'll write more

jbilovejbiloveover 12 years ago
Yes!!!

I eagerly await for this story to continue to its obvious additional episodes .

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Why is this in the ts section? It should be in bdsm.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Ok, but flawed writing

Lots of spelling and grammar errors make the story hard to read. Nice domination story but I'd have to say the sub could be more realistically dealing with this rather than just going along all the time.

Omega ManOmega Manabout 11 years ago
Nice start.

It's a nice start to the series, and quite a pre-dick-ament that Trista's new "Little Slut" is in already. Looking forward to reading the next Chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

What a dickhead !!!

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