All Comments on 'Workplace Discipline'

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vietnamvetvietnamvetover 4 years ago
Great story!

How do I get a job there?!

RondeevuRondeevuover 4 years ago
Fantastic Beginning

Can't wait for the next instalment! Love it.

jane marwoodjane marwoodover 4 years ago
Most enjoyable 5*****

I would like to read more of this story. My regards, Jane

szymonszymonover 3 years ago

just stumbled over it. Would love to see a part 2. Good work and thanks for sharing with us.

mattenwmattenwover 2 years ago

Now let's be honest, even the die-hard masochists will have serious doubts about this story. A fantasy has to have at least a little reference to reality. This story is pure SiFi. He gets dressed, goes to the hospital and the police and the two ladies go to jail (for a very long time) and he sues the ladies and the company and becomes very wealthy. And as a wealthy young man he can get himself a dominant mistress and he can decide when and what happens!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story. You have to suspend disbelief that this would fly girl. however because of his shitty work and internet history they literally and figuratively had him bythe balls. I usually dislike hardcore matriarchal femdom stories because many of them just seem cruel. I guess his genuinely deserving punishment made it more palatable. The sexual playfulness made it ok too. I hope the bdsm doesn't get too brutal.

RegretsRegretsover 1 year ago
He will not be able to resist

He will touch himself. There needs to be a cage. A kick in the nuts can do a lot of damage. Maybe think of something else. How about, go to her flat, after work?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

while he may have deserved it, mrs connor was really mean cunt. she beat him way too hard. and the fverbl abuse and threats were scary. after a beating kindness and aftercare are absolutely required. He liable to get very hurt in this situation. I think a police call and hospital visits is warranted, even violence but he doesn't seem up to it. more sad than hot.and yet I love the story. But I do hate victimization which this is., I'm all messed up.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Interesting premise.

But it rushed to the ass paddling/pussy eating.

The women knew of his porn watching history. They should have explored that. What kind of porn did he watch? Like best?

How often did he masturbate? To the porn?

When did he last cum?

Does he like being teased?

Does he like being edged?

He could have been instructed to find some porn onlike. He could have been instructed to jerk off while watching it, but not allowed to cum.

Even the spanking was too much. And certainly the ball beating was waaaaay over the top. Really negative.

He had to crawl over to eat her pussy. What did it look like? Shaved? Trimmed? Hairy?

Did he like the look of it?

He should have been directed to worship her pussy.

Three stars.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good story, except for the full force kick to the balls. BDSM impact play actually has alot of safety requirements, which I wont belabor here. But most cbt, except for insane extreme porn, is done in a controlled manner. The ass can take a beating safely, as long as no blood is drawn, the balls too, but the female exec was a newbie. The other mistress boss, should have not left him with the other boss who was clearly a novice. If you like femdom it is a good story. I'm on the fence. I like femdom, but only safe sane And consentual, with no malice, based on respect, trust. and physical and emotional safety.

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I'm just a 30 something guy who enjoys writing as a hobby. Sometimes it feels that my whole life is an indulgence of various and numerous hobbies, including my job where I sit at my desk and talk into a microphone. While I present as a masculine straight man I'm not sure what...