All Comments on 'Workplace Strip Search'

Very well written. Your attention to detail and pacing really makes this story stand out from other similarly-themed works. The man's gradual exertion of control over his subject really plays out quite effectively and subtly enough that it doesn't feel too forced.

The way everything transitioned from an innocuous body search into an explicit exercise in sexual servitude was nothing short of masterful and while I would've liked to see more reaction on the woman's end, maybe it was better that you left that portion understated, as it makes her switch to subservience more intriguing and unexpected.

I look forward to reading more such narratives, especially if they follow along this line of "effortless force" and patient subjugation of the victim.