All Comments on 'World of Free Use Ch. 06'

Not a bad premise, however its getting kind of repetitious. How about meeting someone else from his world or someone coming to bring him back. Even though its sexual paradise, there has to be some tension for danny to over come.

Loving where this story is going, when do we get more? I’m eager to see what happens next.

Will you continue this series? Great worldbuilding, it would be interesting to see PoVs of characters other than Danny.

I will eventually continue. I have been working on a new story; however, I have rewritten it once already and it is lengthy, which is why it is taking so long. I'm also going to put out a 6-part story that I had on a different site a couple years ago on here. The main reason that a Free Use World part 7 is not here yet is because this is as far ahead as I planned. I do have more ideas for the free use world but I havent typed them up yet.

Please get an editor or at least do a better job of proofreading your stuff. I was fascinated by the story, but missing or wrong words just interrupted it.