All Comments on 'Worry for Safety Turns Fun'

by Mjruk

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hmmm....

this is a decent theme, but the plot needs work. They are all staying in a hotel but have a local office? Also not very believeable that the coworker has a room in the hotel, and shows up unnanounced?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I also say "Hmmm"

1) Agree that your setup lacks believability

2) Yeah, men would love to be able to cum as much as you described. Nice fantasy.

3) Proofread, damnit!

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