All Comments on 'Wrapped Around Your Finger'

by MichelleLovesTo

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kbatekbateover 18 years ago
Unfinished?

Nice tale, Please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Very Good

Oh the games people play!

Boyd

rgraham666rgraham666over 18 years ago
Snicker

Over confidence.

Always the downfall of the magical.

Nice little piece of work.

MichelleLovesToMichelleLovesToover 18 years agoAuthor
Thanks Everyone

I think of it as being a finished story, but who knows what the future will bring.

Thanks for the wonderful comments. I appreciate them.~ Michelle

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A delightful story

Thank You for allowing us to share it with you. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nicely worked

You could still continue their story - if you wanted...

Lukas

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Beautiful

I just want to say that this is probably one of my favourite stories on Literotica. The only thing that could make it better is a longer tale to the same standards. What's here implies a rich back-story and potential for so much more interplay between the two lovers that I would love to see expanded on.

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