All Comments on 'Writing Sexuality 03'

Well worth the wait. The tension/erotic suspense palpable. Even thinking you know what is about to happen does not come close to what you created. “I promise we're not leading you astray, Rosa” the double entendre so obvious/so telling. And she/they did not lead her astray. All three characters so intricately crafted; feel so believable/real. The sex outrageously erotic, never gratuitous, and so revealing of each character. Even the subtle movements seductive and revealing like Beth’s “… brushing a loose strand of hair away, tucking it gently behind my ear.” in the very first chapter before that first kiss. Ellie did essentially same at the bar/tavern in this chapter. Rosa is experiencing what her lovers mean by sapphic power exchanges — and they are exchanges and surely dynamic if not volatile (not necessarily in negative way). Pretty obvious I am intrigued by what you are doing.

First let me tell you how glad I am to read another part of this series (I did not dare to expect that, honestly). The setting is fresh and interesting, your writing vivid, and your characters captivating (Beth, especially). That said, I am not very fond of Elle. Call me too vanilla or maybe you are are just laying the basis for the things to come, but I feel Elle is ultimately just a coldhearted bitch that won't do Rosa any good. Rosa may be eager and open to try new things, but hopefully she keeps some sense of self-worth in the end. Beth, on the other side, may be good advisor in this regard, too. Please, continue! Best, A

Actually, I like Elle. I like the whole story. A lot. I think Elle and Beth have different styles, but I don't either of them as being in any way bad or untrustworthy. I think this is beautifully written and mad hot, and I thank you for it. I hope you continue.

One of the interesting things to me is that you can take a conversation between the characters, or a small gesture by the characters, and give it more heat than most people's sex scenes. You do slow burn, buildup and anticipation really well.

Absolutely stunning! I was waiting eagerly for the continuation of this story. Please don't stop writing. You're a such a talented writer!

So happy you came back to continue this story!! Would kill to know what Elle and Beth whisper to one another. Love your work!

This is such a fantastic piecie! I was worried that this part will never come but it was so worth the wait! I love all the tension and the chemistry between the characters, I also love that everything is clearly consentual and wanted by all parties. Again, so hot!

I love this! I’m obsessed with this series honestly. You’re a fantastic writer, and you do the build and execution so well. I love Elle’s character - As an experienced sub myself, I love the different flavours of domination. I love a soft caregiver domme and a strict, harsh domme with exacting standards too. It’s great to see the different dynamics play out. I hope you continue

this was such a well written story. i truly hope you come back to it for a chapter 4

So glad to come across your stories. Enjoying them very much.

This is so good. I hope you come back!

Morrre please! You write so well, the characters are so believable and the erotic tension palpable. Love this series xx