All Comments on 'Wrong Place at the Right Time Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

what the fuck was the last part. you're sick

RoboButtonsRoboButtonsover 2 years ago

This definitely belongs in non-consent/reluctance and not group sex. Also, you might want to give readers a heads up at the very top of the story letting them know that the writing contains rape and beastiality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

EWWW! >:(

ADBullockeADBullockeover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the criticisms! I know it isn't everyone's cup of tea. I write for commission and this was the requested story. I will definitely tag it better!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

" A young woman is abducted and used. "

Thoroughly.

Even a horny stray got in on the action. I enjoyed the detail. I especially liked the very beginning when she was passing through each street light. Very vivid. Messy. Deliciously disgusting.

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Augustus D. Bullocke - Smut/Literotica Commissions Open I am here to take all those lewd fantasies that are in your brain. You know those things you can't find anywhere on the internet that are JUST right. I will take them ALL and put them into words on paper for you to read,...