All Comments on 'Wrongfully Accused Ch. 07-09'

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It could of been better, needs a bit more excitement. You build up the story and then drop it back to the start with out anything happening, major disappointment. I just hope the next part is better.

This is the first I have seen of this story but it is interesting in the concept that you are creating. Hope to see more in the future

I feel like the story needs more than all the women swooning over him and everyone telling us that hes the top dog. Let him get it on with the mother, aunt and daughter, throw the lawyer also in there for good measure and move on to some plot other than 'I am the best and all the women want me'. Its headed there anyway without being subtle.

Damn, can't wait for Part 11 through whatever. 5 BIG ASS FUCKING FLAMING NOVA STARS! Thank you.

great story, cant wait for the next chapter

shot callers not shock collars, really enjoying the story so far.

Im sorry to say this, but I am quite disappointed with this latest set of chapters.

Jason seems to suddenly be both blind, deaf and generally clueless. Yet, he is also portrayed as being intelligent and very observant. And then there is the gaggle of females that seem to have adopted a ghost by the name of V, while being described as nothing but meat/eye-candy. Please keep in mind, just because a story is posted on lit, there are still, a lot of, people that appreciate a good story, instead of a rushed collection of words.

Your first chapter bundle of this series left a much more coherent impression of the characters than this one.

Far too many wrong words.

Like the storyline, but the spelling errors and mis-used words make it hard to follow. I do like your work / passion. I couldn't do what you do. Keep writing, I'll be waiting for your next postings.

Enjoying the story, but your having an auto correct nightmare

I'm still amazed that by the year 2030 Tesla's are being driven by humans and not their robot overlords!

Anyway, far too many errors throughout just auto corrected without any real attention to detail, just as an example in the last paragraph you wrote, "...As he apprised his study..." where I'm assuming you meant 'approached' instead of 'apprised' as it makes not literal sense. There are plenty of other instances, it needs someone with a more practiced eye to look over it and add corrections.

Dude get a proof reader. The autocorrectes are killing an otherwise good story

good job 5*.

Wasn't it Ronald Reagan who said "Autocorrect, but verify." ? 😜😂

But seriously, I'm really enjoying the story so far. The misspellings and such don't bother me too much and don't hinder my enjoyment of 'Wrongfully...' 5/5*