All Comments on 'Wrongfully Accused Ch. 10-12'

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RanDog025RanDog025over 1 year ago

Hell of a time to call it quits? lol. 5 BIG ONES

froggytreefroggytreeover 1 year ago

Great series so far. I hope the ex enters the story too, so she can see what she missed.

kennyboy25kennyboy25over 1 year ago

Awesome story your telling us. Please give us more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can't wait for the next chapter. This is a really good story...

NYcastawayNYcastawayover 1 year ago

How long before the next chapters?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please, don't take forever for the next, chapter.

hindsight2020hindsight2020over 1 year ago

3* Could have been 5, but two months between combined with serious editing issues 3 is the best you should expect.

Ocean33Ocean33over 1 year ago

Amazing story o have been hooked since the first submission. Wondering when the next segment will be released?

MakehandpartyMakehandpartyover 1 year ago

Arrrgh!!!! It is 3 days after this last part posted and I have blasted through the whole. Now I'm jonesing for the next part. I hope I don't have to wait too long!!!

EndOfStoryEndOfStoryover 1 year ago

Please ask your editor to read through your writing, not just rely on a spellchecker, because context matters.

"John wiped out his cock" <- if this is the intended phrasing, he is not going to spew anything after the fact.

chipmonk9chipmonk9over 1 year ago

Law of the jungle

JamesBrooksJamesBrooksover 1 year ago

Great story so far.

RichardmilnerRichardmilnerover 1 year ago

Please continue this excellent story

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please finish this story.

Ocean33Ocean33over 1 year ago

I hope the next installment comes soon

JoeDierteeJoeDierteeover 1 year ago

Great story with so much potential! Really hope you’re inspired with more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can't wait for the next part to this story, I hope it gets better from this point. It has a few good bud ups from the other chapters, but they just leave you hanging.

It has potential to be a good series, just need to be longer and have plot twists that you don't see coming.

Just some ideas bring his family into the mix or if ex fiance or more drama and romance and a few bits of violence.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue

cursrahcursrahover 1 year ago

more of this story please

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

really looking forward to the next installment...

Ocean33Ocean33about 1 year ago

Next Installment?

Hottdreams80720Hottdreams80720about 1 year ago

Damn. I’m loving this. Hope the next chapters are coming along. Thanks

jkthekatjkthekatabout 1 year ago

uh huh- writers block huh? well do us all a big favor and finish these stories as they are great!!

H2OwolfH2Owolfabout 1 year ago

Love the story, can't wait for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please finish the story.

RichardmilnerRichardmilnerabout 1 year ago

Please can you please let us have move of this excellent story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Please finish the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

are you going to write another chapter or have you quit.

Zaccheaus93Zaccheaus937 months ago

An amazing story I love it, this story alone made me follow you.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Where is she? He should have said I'M BATMAN. lol

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