All Comments on 'Wynn'

super annoying way to write what is supposed to be dialogue. Presumably you have seen other stories, read a book maybe, which demonstrates how to do that. This is like a badly formatted outline for a story somebody might want to read, once it's completed.

Thank you. I know how much time and effort it takes to think of a story and type it out. Then to put it out there and take that kind of risk. With few exceptions, we’re not Steinbeck or Hemingway. I know I’m not. So again, thank you for sharing and I hope you don’t let anyone discourage you if you want to keep sharing.

Any chance of part 2? I really enjoyed the story