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rb5891about 1 year agoI like the story, very much! It is great that he can see stuff through other things with acuity. It is the edge of suspended disbelief when he sees what people are doing 5 miles away on a jetliner, but the international space station is 248 miles up. If he can see that, can he see viruses?
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Elaine_Mature@Elaine_MatureOlder author and reader, interested in emotionally significant writing with empathy and respect. New story on its last draft, about coming-of-age and a road trip. Not sure what to call it, but it features three young women catching a ride with a farm boy, headed for the big c...
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