All Comments on 'Xander Ch. 02'

I'm enjoying your stories and while it sucks that you're gonna take some time off, i understand because i also classes. Just dont take too long cuz we need more badass, titus, and xander!

I see that you've made quite a few mistakes, but you always submit corrected versions of your stories. Wouldnt it just be easier to proof read them? Lol anyway, great stories. Keep it up.

Needs some proofing but the story is excellent and well told. I look forward to more.

fucking amazing! Keep it coming.

Totally awesome!! MORE MORE MORE and also more of badass too!!

"this will be my last submission for a while"... FUCK YOU...

besides the many spelling and grammar errors (which im not going to go nazi about), so far, this is a GREAT fucking start... its a bit... rushed, or even "unexplained" in some places, but otherwise, I REALLY hate you for having exams and such because I want to read the next chapter RIGHT NOW...

Keep up the good work!

Want more. Coz it's awesome

bullshit! more! want more!!!

really loved it. keep it coming

Really liking this story..don't disappear for too long :)

The storyline is unique and enjoyable,,,keep up the good work...

Thanks again for the story. You nicely explained alot of the the world you made. There were still a few typos and such, but nothing too horrible. Good luck with your studies and tests. You have a nice talent for strory telling. Giving just enough information to describe the action and yet leaving enough of a space to let the reader fill in the gaps. I have enjoyed your works, and your take on things. Thank you again

Bainsidhe

I am a sci/fi fan from way back. I cant wait for the next story. dont be gone too long. it sounds quite interesting. cant wait to find out more about Xander's background..

Im loving this series cant wait for more keep up the great work

You need to write more. Now.

Also, not hating on you but, how many RPG's do you play? You have classes worked out, battle mages, armors, special weapons, affinaties, these seem to be from a video game (or Dungeons and Dragons). Good work though! Continue to make Xander more badass!

dude finish your stories i love them this and titus rock

hello, i have been reading your stories since u started on lit and been waiting for a long time for any update. i know it doesn't earn u any money and i appreciate the fact that u spend time writing these stories. i would like to know if u ever plan to continue any of your stories and when if u do. its been to long and i don't mind waiting but i just want to know if i should expect a update or not.

and i loved all your stories so far and would like u to continue your work if u can, if not, just post a msg that u cant continue them and i will understand.

thanks for the updates so far.

Nick.

When will the next update be for this awesome series, please have it be soon

Really cool story, can't wait to see more

man the while universe of literotica is waiting for next installment.

so wake up from your slumber and post installment asap.

Keep posting, loved the story..

Excellent story. Everything you've used to describe Xander has made me love this character and I'd love to see more postings of this story as well as your other stories.

Love it please keep it going

amazing story.. hope your exams are over.

been a long time... where is the rest of the story????

Great work! Hope you keep writing

Amazing story. As always.

This is one of the best stories i've read in a long time. Please continue as soon as possible

Awesome job brother.

cool story

If you don't write more than a couple chapters of your stories people will quickly

Tire of reading them because of no continuation! I think you have a real talent but, personally I won't start reading new stories if I don't think they will be finished.

Have you finished your exams yet, it's been over a year.

This is very similar to fair tale the anime.

update any of your stories

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE IT PLEASE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I loved the story. Just like I loved all your other stories. I am eagerly awaiting new chapters (not only for this story but for all).

JW

This is a great story so far you should really continue it.

This is some good shit. Pity the author lost his mojo

Great now you're back more please.

Same as chapter 2 - The sword play was WELL done

Wish for another chapter

yet another incomplete fantasy story... i can only hope the author is well... if so, i wish s/he'd finish this

Please continue writing, it has so much potential! And thanks for the story so far.

Its been 10 years. That's a super long exam. Come baaaaaaack!!!!