All Comments on 'Yanari'

"She looked around for an odd-shaped rock or something else that she might be able to use as an impromptu cup, but was forced to bend forward, submerge her face, and drink like an animal."

Why didn't she just cup her hands and drink out of them like a normal person?

later on why didn't she just pull off one of the tentacles and eat that instead of bothering to perform fellatio on it?

I mean the sex you described her having with the tentacles was not that hot.

I found this story really non erotic.

Gobs of blue slime dribbled all over soft, taut skin is ALWAYS erotic.

Don't listen to that guy up there, this is a good story!

i found that you used the word seemingly too often

...agree with anon about the 'rock cup'....hmmm...had a mini block did you ?

Hey, you were shootin' from the hip, no prob, most of us have to once in awhile.

I thought the rest of it made for a very 'satisfyingly' entertaining read like the vast

majority of your stories that I've read so far. GO TEAM!! More please. Thanks!

Oh ya, I have to agree, Blue Slime is definitely

"HOT" !! Cold shower anyone?