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Anonymousabout 3 years agoPoor choice for a first submission, if you have nothing better quit while you're ahead.
yowserabout 3 years agoSemiconscious
A strange and oddly alluring tale. Hints and twists and distorted logic with authentic longings.
Lovely.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoCreative story, it makes me wonder... but the mystery is part of the allure! :D
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