All Comments on 'Yen's Road Trip Ch. 01'

Great style. Love it. Suggest she is forced to have cosmetically enhanced breasts which is hard to hide in her job as a Doctor!

Love the intensity of this story so far. It's well written to the point that you actually feel like you're there and the characterisation is strong. The writer also took the time to describe Yen's appearance in detail, something which is often overlooked in other stories but which really adds to the imagery. Let's hope that either Charles or Dwan makes her get more tattoos and piercings along the way, maybe to the point where she can't go back to her vanilla life...

I love the story. The style is perfect, the topic is one of my favorites. Keep on writing. Hopefully we get to know the outcome of the trip.

Wonderful writing style and great characters, hope you keep going!

Great job on this intriguing story! Thanks for sharing and I’m looking forward to reading part 2! You have an awesome writing style.

Fun ride, well-written, and very very hot