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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

The basic plot is good, but the story needs to be more filled in and a little less left to the imagination. It feels like it should be a three chapter story arc with each chapter being as long as the current story.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Wolf have been nice to hear about Billy getting sodick in a 3some with Marnie.

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