All Comments on 'Yes, Sir'

It's got humor, a promising premise, readable dialog (sheesh, the writers who don't or won't use quote marks, won't separate dialog into paragraphs by speaker), BELIEVABLE dialog (never use contractions, every character sounds like every other character).

Anyway ... more! Longer! Please.

It has promise I think but lets see some more material.

Like it but maybe a little bit longer chapters and please don’t make the protagonist into getting cucked, cause it kinda seems like that’s where you are going. 👍

Can't wait to see what's next. Does he Domme the 2 or maybe get another woman that Luke couldn't get and rub it in.

I'm hoping with his new powers he has his best friend choke the life out of the cheating slut and then gouge out his own eyes.

Please don't make this a faggot, cuckold story.

I hate these silly multi-part stories. Can't be bothered to chase the next installment.

I’d like to read more. And be happy if it turns into a cuck story, especially if the narrator is calling the shots. If he made them both fuck until they’re sore from and hate it? That’d be hot.

When are we going to see part 2?

A very good start, just seems a tad quick. Thank you!