All Comments on 'Yesterday She was Still a Girl'

Immature writing: Daddy, baby girl, cheerleaders etc.

Punctuation please!

Thank you for another monster cock story.

He needs to eat and fuck all 3 girls.

I so want to read the next one.

Damn good read. I can see a triple breeding taking place with baby bumps sprouting from the seeded gardens in the near future. Then he can bring the other friends & all of their mommies into his breeding herd. Also claim all of the married mommies away from their current satellite bulls. Nothing like a good herd bull to service a nice herd of heifers & cows to have new younglings running around the neighborhood. While continuing to take care of his new daughter/wife. Next chapters please. 5☆

That's it? No chapter number is an indication it is.

He has to breed all three at the same time.

I can't wait for the next part

1. Present tense removes most readers from immersion in the story.

2. If you are planning on multiple parts to a story, put either ch. 1 or part 1 in the title, the ending was too abrupt, making the story kind of meh.

3. Punctuation is important.

Otherwise, an okay first story.