Yin-Yang 02: The Return of Jack Daniels

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"Thanks." Jack went into the bathroom to take his shower. He never turned his back to the shower curtain. When he was finished, he dried off and went to the bedroom where Brandy was waiting with her head on her pillow. There was no lovemaking tonight. There was pure, unadulterated fucking. Jack thought several times that his dick might not make it or be sucked into her mouth and swallowed whole.

They made it through two rounds of sex before settling in for sleep. He waited an hour for Brandy to fall asleep deep enough so he could check under her pillow without waking her. Beforehand, he had re-checked under his pillow. The new machete was still there. He felt relief. As he clutched the new weapon he had placed there and got ready to take it out, Jack heard a distinctive, metal CLICK next to his head.

"Uh oh."

*****

RAWLINGS

It was not a call Detective Rawlings was expecting. There had been no recent reports of bloody murders that suggested either the Yin-Yang or Dear John Killer for quite a while. He was hoping Jack and the Dear John killer were gone. A bloody scene was found in a condo rented in Jack Daniels' name. The landlord had come by this morning after the rent was overdue. The smell was horrible, and the blood had long since dried on the bed. It had not been spilled recently.

Detective Rawlings knew immediately what had happened. "Damnit. I thought I was done with this serial killer shit! It looks like the Dear John Killer and the Yin-Yang Killer had a grudge match in bed." He was tempted to leave the scene and put in for early retirement.

Author's note: Okay, I deliberately left open the door for a third episode. Please give feedback on what you would like to see happen to Brandy and Jack.

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I’d like to see where you go.

Please more.

LOVE slap-hapy-papy#9

RobertaBobRobertaBobover 2 years ago

The lights go on. Jack sees the click came from a gun held by some large guy he does not know. The guy thanks him for getting rid of the boss and allowing him to take over. Before he can pull the trigger, Brandy lifts the covers, showing the guy her naked body. He is distracted long enough for her to throw a knife into his throat.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Hmm

Very good thanks more episodes of killing off the bad guys sounds good to mel

IndyOnIndyOnabout 3 years ago

In real life there are too many people who do really bad things and get away with it. At the end Rawling's didn't say there were any bodies so what if Jack and Brandy fixed their wounds and teamed up to go after the bad guys? What great story lines you could use....They could go after pedophiles, maybe a few really bad cheaters and a few bad politicians or even bad cops. What a team!

johsunjohsunover 3 years ago

I'd love a third episode, although I assume they're both dead at the of this one. Good read even for the second time around.

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