All Comments on 'Yin's College Experiences Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Not incest , wrong area

EZ8ltEZ8ltabout 2 years ago

Wrong category.

PandelusionPandelusionabout 2 years ago

It is in the wrong category, but the story has potential. From your other writing I've noticed you rush a little, take your time and let a story develop. I hope you continue this story further but create some good character development to keep a reader interested.

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Hi there, My name's Yin. I love writing stories about myself mainly, but just know that none of them are actually true and has not happened. The description in my stories of Yin is the same as myself. If you'd like to get into contact with me then please leave a comment or c...