All Comments on 'You and I'

This was both sad and ironically funny. You have to appreciate a friend who will shock you and then lie to save your feelings, but manages to leave the husband in a likely untenable position.

Hoisted on her own petard!

5

... but they kicked it up to 4*'s.

Well done, keep up the good work.

EmmSea from Oz.

Really good! If he hadn't been so quick to instantly forgive, his best shot would probably have been to pin his hair up in a man bun and tell her he's "going to have to take some time and space to become comfortable before being intimate again" or some nonsense like that. As it is, I think he's in for some weepy days cause its all coming out in the bedroom unless he's REALLY a stud (and hopefully he also already took a pill before he was with Allison :-)

He ;-)

Nice one.

Until now this was today's best 750 words story!

Nice change of tactics

You never know what is going to happen after you suggest something. A good story.

Disgusting and dishonest people with their brain between their legs.

Opps! He was thinking with his dick and was not expecting a remorseful wife showing up, three times in an evening. The wife is expecting a full workout, could be trouble.

Haha brilliant!

I hate it when the husband doesn't carry through with his threats to get some strange if the wife cheats.

Nice work! Little editing glitch toward end where Allison and Tiff switched places in dialogue, but great otherwise. 4.7*

It was a 3 or 4 star (being generous) story until after the "best friend ever" line. Great ending!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐!

Hope he has a blue pill. D

"Oh shit" indeed :} *****

The last line did it for me. Five stars

Nasty -- 5*

Very nice! If hubby can think as fast on his feet as Allison, he'll be able to come up with an excuse to avoid sex - just say that he's forgiven her but still "needs a bit of time" before he's comfortable being that intimate. Like, maybe 12 hours ...

Creative, original, I liked it .

Full marks!

Oh, what a tangled web we weave..."

That’s funny.

A strange tale. What messed it up for me were the times it was unclear who was talking or reacting. The story had potential, but...? Three stars.

JPB

"although I was far from forgiving her," - What's to forgive? She didn't cheat, HE did!

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"Allison winked and mouthed 'call me.'" - "Call me?" They plan continuing cheating? Not cool.

Much better than a traditional BTB!

Haha that was a great short story. That made my day!

5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Hubby got nothing to bitch about, wife was honest and hubby turned out to be a cheating coward.

Great short story with a superb last line. But he is a bit of a bastard cause we know he and Allison will continue fucking.

“Oh shit” indeed. The guy won’t be able to get it up —- partly because he’s spent….partly because he’s still furious with his dumbshit wife.

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4 ****

4.5 stars - first, the author did NOT provide evidence that the skank "didn't have sex", other than her lying mouth running empty words. Second, even if she miraculously didn't lie, she had an emotional affair, and he's STILL staying married to her :(

Great how the author used the standard "we have to talk" preamble to give substance to his story, keeping total word count down. I do wonder how Tiff is going to respond to the well used, cum soaked bed she's about to encounter. She really doesn't have any room to complain as her own arguments are simply going to be replayed to her.

Lol. Imagine some poor fools learning how to have sex from Pornhub.

Very well done with clever twist and ending.

Oh Ho! Nice planning job. Good luck on having your soldier stand at attention after his hard work out.

This is hilarious. I love it!

One cheating asshat deserves the other. who was worse? Who cares, they are both the same.

I laughed out loud. Marvelous.

Great!

Hooked

Best ending ever LMAO!

5* for cuteness. Two wrongs don't make a right, but once the wife opened up the marriage, it was fair game.

Cheeky short tale. I think a lot was conveyed in the allotted word count.

He has better reach down and find sumpin for her, he he he. 5+

Great punch line!

Excellent

Landed that perfectly. 10.0

That was a good one. Looks like Allison taught him quite a bit.

Who says you can't tell a good story in 750 words?

Never marry anyone named Tiffany. You tube search hot crazy matrix

Ooops...

Ha, great story.

Nice twist.

The tag line was REAL!!

That’s a great one.

A vapid dumbass wannabe cuck and a slut with second thoughts until the next time she itches for strange. Truly they are made for each other, what an adorable couple. A love story for the ages.

Whoops!

The last line, omg well done. Well written and told so much in less than 750 "I am sorry hunny i guess i have forgiven you, but he is still upset!"

Ha!!!

I would welcome a follow-up. 5*s

Really nice.

Excellent, thank you.

Clever well written and to the point

Well played. Funny. We can only assume he plans to continue with Allison which means his marriage is over. His wife is so naive that perhaps the marriage could be saved with a little sex education, but only if he is done with Allison.

LOL 4 times is possible, maybe

In the longer version, invite Allison in for a threesome to “educate” his wife. Oh yeah

That was awesome.

5* for the punchline !

I liked that a lot. Foolish wife, but maybe she gets a second chance.

It is *really* damned rare that 750 tells a whole story, but this one does it great. It doesn't bother spelling out the old trope that we've heard a bunch of times, but relies on us to know what's going on. It gives us hints behind the scenes, and sets the possibilities for the future. It doesn't spell them out, but I'm not really left feeling wanting by the open endedness. 5*

A very complete 750 word story, very well done⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️